假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(八).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A shopping center in England is selling a magic dressing mirror，that uses 3D technology to enable you choose and try on all kinds of clothes from different stores．When you stand in the front of the mirror，it will use the technology to make their own judgment of your body shape．It is very convenient of you to find the most suitable dress．You do not have to spend a lot of time walk around，or shut yourself in a small fitting room．So far the mirror had worked really good with women's clothing．A new kind of softwares for menswear and kidswear is being developing．

分析英国购物中心销售一种魔法试衣镜．这种应用3D技术的镜子可以让你试穿不同商店的衣服．当你站在镜子前，它就可以判断你的体型，找到最适合的服装，你就不需要到处逛了．到目前为止，效果不错．

解答 A shopping center in England is selling a magic dressing mirror，that uses 3D technology to enable you∧choose and try on all kinds of clothes from different stores．When you stand in the front of the mirror，it will use the technology to make their own judgment of your body shape．It is very convenient of you to find the most suitable dress．You do not have to spend a lot of time walk around，or shut yourself in a small fitting room．So far the mirror had worked really good with women's clothing．A new kind of softwares for menswear and kidswear is being developing．
详解：
1．that改为which；连词错误．题干是一个非限制性定语从句，不能用that来引导；先行词mirror指物，要用which来引导．
2．加to；短语搭配错误．enable sb to do sth让某人能够做某事．
3．the去掉．短语搭配错误．in the front of表示内部的前面；in front of表示外部的前面；句意表达的是站在镜子前．
4．their改为its；逻辑指代错误．句意指代的是主语it，即前面提到的mirror，要用形容词性物主代词its来修饰．
5．of改为for；句型搭配错误．it is+形容词+for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说怎么样．
6．walk改为walking；短语搭配错误．spend some time（in）doing sth花时间做某事．
7．had改为has；主谓一致错误．句中的主语是the mirror，谓语动词要用单数．
8．good改为well；副词错误．句中是修饰动词worked，要用副词形式．
9．softwares改为software；名词错误．句意表达的是单数．
10．developing改为developed；分词错误．句意表达的是被动，要用过去分词来构成．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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