Question

【题目】假定你是李华，国外著名学习网 Student Tube邀请你发帖分享你平时的学习方式。要点如下：

1. 多读多写；2. 合理安排时间；3. 其他方式（自拟）。

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear friends,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

I’d like to share my own learning experience with you, as I hope it can be useful to you.

First of all, do more reading and writing. Reading is the key to opening your eyes, while writing is a helpful way to make good use of what you have learned. Besides, make a reasonable study schedule. Though study comes first, you need relaxation as well. In order not to be tired, I have been actively taking part in after- school activities. By doing so, I can spare time to develop a strong social ability. Last but not least, I prefer studying by myself, which gives me the chance to succeed in solving hard problems.

In a word, just remember that developing your own learning style is the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，分享平时的学习方式。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

人称：第一人称

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分总法

要点：

1. 多读多写；2. 合理安排时间；3. 其他方式（自拟）。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

be useful to；reading and writing；the key to；make good use of；reasonable；study schedule；relaxation；take part in；after- school activities；spare time to do sth.；social ability；prefer；chance；succeed in doing；learning style；In a word；as well等

第三步：连词成句

1. I’d like to share my own learning experience with you

2. Reading is the key to opening your eyes, while writing is a helpful way to make good use of what you have learned.

3. Though study comes first, you need relaxation as well.

4. I have been actively taking part in after- school activities.

5. I can spare time to develop a strong social ability.

6. I prefer studying by myself, which gives me the chance to succeed in solving hard problems.

7. Developing your own learning style is the best.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all；Last but not least；

2.表并列补充关系：Besides；and；

3.表转折对比关系：Though；while+从句；

4.表因果关系：so；as等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改