Question

【题目】假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike来信告诉你下个月他要来海南旅游,对于他的到来你很开心,并做了一些安排,请给他回信告知你的安排。信的内容包括：

1.表达欢迎之情。

2.介绍海南的特色 。

3.说明你的安排。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike.

I' m more than excited to know that you' ll come to Hainan for a visit next month.You ' re warmly welcome! To make your travel here more smooth, let me tell you my arrangements for you. First of all, since you' ve never been to Hainan before,I will go and pick you up at the airport. Secondly, if you like, I' d like to invite you to live and dine in my home during your stay in Hainan. I' ll surely make you feel at home. Thirdly, I can accompany you during your whole trip here if you wish.

What do yon think of my arrangement? looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。你的英国朋友要来海南旅游，对于他的到来你很开心,并做了一些安排,请给他回信告知你的安排。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

要求：1.对对方的到来表示欢迎

2.介绍海南特色

3.旅游安排

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

more than; warmly welcome; arrangements; first of all; pick sb up; make sb feel at home; invite sb to do sth; accompany; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I' m more than excited to know that you' ll come to Hainan for a visit next month.

2. You ' re warmly welcome!

3. To make your travel here more smooth, let me tell you my arrangements for you.

4. First of all, since you' ve never been to Hainan before,I will go and pick you up at the airport.

5. Secondly, if you like, I' d like to invite you to live and dine in my home during your stay in Hainan.

6. I' ll surely make you feel at home.

7. Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand…，Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…。

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改