Question

【题目】国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集讨论话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一电子邮件，向其推荐话题。

内容包括：自我简介；写信目的；话题：我们应该感恩；推荐的理由；预祝活动成功。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．邮件格式已为你给出，不计入总词数；

4．邮件中不能出现本人真实信息。

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School, and in my spare time I often visit your website, from which I know that you are collecting topics for discussion. Interested in it, I’d like to recommend my topic, which is “We Should Be Thankful”.

As you know, we middle school students, the new generation, who were born in the early 1990s, have been growing up with so much love from others. Some of us always take it for granted that our parents, grandparents and teachers should take care of us. needless to say, we seldom think of others’ feelings. Therefore, I hope by discussing this topic, we can learn to thank those who always give us their selfless love.

Wish your activity a success.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

1.文章从整体来看，结构顺序安排合理，逻辑性强，多处运用连词，具有转折关系的副词等使得上下文衔接更加合理。

2.文章运用了“As you know”，“needless to say"等习惯用语，使行文更加流畅，使人读起来更有亲切感。

3文章多处运动限定性定语从句和非限定性定语从句等，高级句型。如I often visit your website, from which I know that you are collecting topics for discussion.和I’d like to recommend my topic, which is“We Should Be Thankful.使得全文的句型结构变化多样。