Question

15．网购 （Online Shopping） 已成为很多人青睐的一种现代购物形式．请你用英语写一篇
短文，谈谈自己对网购的看法．你的短文必须包括：
 网上购物的长处
 网上购物可能存在的问题
 你的观点
参考词汇：网店店主Internet shopping provider    假货fake goods．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲类作文，根据提供的材料，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己对网购的看法．写作要点包括：网上购物的长处；网上购物可能存在的问题；你的观点．写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：prefer to do（喜欢做）；enjoy doing；as…as…（和…一样）；fake goods（假货）；In addition（另外）；work out（制定出）；await（等待，期）．
高分句型：1．Nowadays，①shopping through the Internet has become increasingly popular among us，many young people prefer to buy almost everything②they want online．
                ①动名词形式在句中作主语，谓语动词用单数形式；②they want 是一个定语从句，修饰先行词almost everything．
               2．In addition，some people find①it very hard to make a change ②when they are not satisfied with the things ③bought online．
                 ①it作形式宾语，不定式短语 to make a change 是真正的宾语；②when引导一个时间状语从句；③bought online是过去分词短语作后置定语．
               3．I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out for the Internet shopping providers．
                that引导一个同位语从句．

解答 Nowadays，shopping through the Internet has become increasingly popular among us，and many young people prefer to buy almost everything they want online（高分句型一）．
Online shopping，however，can sometimes bring headaches to people when they enjoy shopping online．Firstly，the quality ofthe goods may not be as good as they are described．Secondly，it is possible forthe buyers to buy fake goods．In addition，some people find it very hard tomake a change when they are not satisfied with the things bought online（高分句型二）．
I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out for the Internet shopping providers（高分句型三）．If so，I believe apromising life of online shopping is just awaiting us．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否覆盖了所给要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，使得上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，使文章浅显易懂，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．