Question

假设你是Tom，是一名高一新生。请你给自己的初中同学Jack写一封信，简要介绍自己的高中生活。

要点：

1. 已经适应高中的生活，并且交了许多朋友；

2. 非常想念过去的老师和同学们，与现在的同学相处得很好，对老师很满意；

3. 自己一定努力学习，希望三年以后能够考上好大学。

注意：字数120词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

Dear Jack,

Yours

Tom

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

How time flies! I have been in high school for a whole month. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many new friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in Junior Middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three year's hard work.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据提示给初中同学Jack写一封信，向他介绍你的高中生活。写作要点包括：已适应高中生活并交到了朋友；想念以前的老师和同学，与现在的同学相处得很好，对老师满意；努力学习并考上好大学这三方面。词数在120词左右；开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了原因状语从句、现在完成时、一般将来时等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：现在完成时By now, I have got used to my new life here.；一般将来时I will make good use of my time；原因状语从句because it is my dream to go to a good university等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用at the beginning of this term, but now, by now, at the same time, and等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了at the beginning of, make friends, get used to, get along well with, make good use of等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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