Question

某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”的讨论活动。
请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇英语短文，客观反映同学们的看法及你自己的观点，向该报社投稿。

Elderly teachers	Young teachers	你的观点
教学耐心 经验丰富 讲解细致	精力充沛 教学活泼 勇于创新	？

注意：1. 短文词数不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应当包括以表格内容，但不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
3. 书写务必清晰工整保持卷面整洁。
参考词汇：enthusiastic 充满热情的   create new ideas创新
Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?
Different students have different opinions about this question.____________________
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Answer 1

Different students have different opinions about this question.Some students may like elderly teachers because they think elderly teachers are more patient compared with young teachers. Besides, elderly teachers have more teaching experience so they can explain important points carefully.
However,other students prefer to be taught by young teachers.Firstly,young teachers are energetic and enthusiastic so they can make their classes more lively and interesting.Secondly,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas;thus they can work more creatively and effectively. Last but not least,young teachers have a lot in common with students,so they are not only teachers and students but also friends.
As far as I am concerned, as long as we can make progress in our studies, it doesn`t matter whether it is elderly teachers or young teachers who teach us.

试题分析：本文是关于年轻老师还是老教师的讨论，属于议论文。文章的要点都已经给了出来，考生只需要用连接词把各要点连接成流畅的短文即可。在写作的使用要选择合适的单词或短语句型把要点的含义恰当的表达出来，同时要变换使用各种句式，让文章充满变化。
点评：议论文写作难点在于恰当的把各种观点表达出来，本文的写作一定要变换使用多种句式让文章更有变化。以及使用高级的句型和连接词。如果可能要使用谚语，让文章更有层次。