Question

17．目前出国旅游很热门，假设你是某高中学生李华，你的朋友Lily计划假期出国旅游，希望你能给予她一些建议．请你用英语写一篇电子邮件回复她．
要点如下：
1．旅游中出现的一些不文明现象．
2．你的建议．
注意1．词数在100左右，
2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：吐痰 spit；树立形象 uphold an image．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）As we know，with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips，some of them shout loudly，litter or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．
该句使用了两个定语从句，第一个as引导非限制性定语从句；第二个which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰整个句子；
（高分句型二）Finally，you should always keep in mind that it is everyone's responsibility to unhold image of our motherland or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．
that引导宾语从句，在宾语从句中还使用了 It is 名词 to do的句型；此外还有which引导定语从句；
高级词汇：do great harm to对…造成伤害； keep in mind 牢记；responsibility责任；
连接过渡词：to begin with首先；What's more表示递进；

解答 Dear lily，
   I am so glad to receive your letter telling me you will go on an overseas trip，here are my suggestions．
   （高分句型一）As we know，with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips，some of them shout loudly，litter or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．（列举旅游中不文明现象）Therefore，to begin with，（建议一）you have to understand and respect foreign cultures，so as to get along well．And before you start your overseas trip，（建议二）remember to learn about the culture and custom there．What's more，（建议三）wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment．In this way，you'll win respect for yourself as well as our country．（高分句型二）Finally，you should always keep in mind that it is everyone's responsibility to unhold image of our motherland．
    I do wish you have a good time!
Yours friend
Lihua

点评 提纲作文实际上是对考生的思路以及文章的写作范围给出了明确的限定，因此考生在写作时，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥；要根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；注意句子的时态，词语的丰富和句型的多样性．