第一节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)每处� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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18．第一节短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Tom，
How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit．
Last Sunday，I paid visit to one of the scenic spot in my hometown．The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，that reads"Import"．"What does it mean？"I asked me．It suddenly dawned on me that it referred"Entrance"．I had a good laugh over it．When I came to the exit，I was shocked by another word"Export"．It was then that I feel obliged to do something about it．
Given the fact is that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．I'm firm convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promote the standard English．Let's make joint efforts to correct the shabby English，and undoubtedly it must be fun or meaningful．
I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析本文主讲述作者上周末到家乡的景区游玩，看到许多令人啼笑皆非的标志牌，比如：景区大门的"入口"被译成import；景区"出口"被译成export．

解答 Dear Tom，
How time flies!It has been almost a year since your last visit．
Last Sunday，I paid∧visit to one of the scenic spot in my hometown．The moment I reached the gate，I was puzzled by a sign，that reads"Import"．"What does it mean？"I asked me．It suddenly dawned on me that it referred∧"Entrance"．I had a good laugh over it．When I came to the exit，I was shocked by another word"Export"．It was then that I feel obliged to do something about it．
Given the fact is that you are expert in English，I sincerely invite you to my hometown during the summer vacation．I'm firm convinced that you are more than delighted to do your part in promote the standard English．Let's make joint efforts to correct the shabby English，and undoubtedly it must be fun or meaningful．
I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．
1．加a 考查冠词．pay a visit to意为"参观（访问）"，是固定搭配．
2．spot改为spots 考查名词复数．one of意为"…之一"，后接名词复数形式．
3．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词sign在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
4．me改为myself 考查代词．ask oneself意为"问自己"，用反身代词．
5．加to 考查固定搭配．refer to意为"指的是"，是固定搭配．
6．feel改为felt 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，用一般过去时态．
7．去掉is 考查句子结构．fact的从句that you are expert in English是同位语从句，对fact进行补充说明，不需要动词is．
8．firm改为firmly 考查副词．convinced是形容词，要用副词修饰．
9．promote改为promoting 考查动名词．in是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
10．or改为and 考查连词．fun和meaningful作表语，是并列关系，而非选择关系，用连词and．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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