Question

17．中学生英语报社正开展一场题为"Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you
prefer？"的讨论活动．请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿．
老年教师：教学耐心．讲解细致．经验丰富
青年教师：精力充沛．教学活泼．勇于创新
你的观点？
注意：1．词数150左右．开头语已为你写好，不计入总数．
Opinions are divided on this question．_________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 中学生英语报社正开展一场题为"Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer？"的讨论活动．根据提示的内容：老年教师，教学耐心．讲解细致．经验丰富；青年教师，精力充沛．教学活泼．勇于创新．最后一定不要忘记讲述自己的观点，简述一下原因．写作时，不要单纯地将提示语直译且罗列出来，注意适当使用并列连词，使得语句通顺，同时也会让理由充分，更有说服力．
【亮点说明】范文为书面表达三段式，层次分明，一目了然．第一段讲述观点一：有人喜欢老年教师；第二段讲述观点二：有人喜欢老年教师；最后一段谈论自己的观点．文中多处运用连词，将整篇文章有机衔接起来，如what's more，however，in addition，besides等．注意一些讲述观点的短语或句型：opinions are divided..，in their views，as for me，I prefer…等．文中最后一段Besides，most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work，which without doubt is beneficial to us students．此处用到非限制性定语从句，which指代前面一句话，表明大多数年轻老师愿意全身心投入工作，毫无疑问，对我们学生是有利的，有力地支撑了自己的观点．
Some students like elderly teachers'teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience．（高分句型一）
In addition，they are more ready to accept or create new ideas，including teaching．（高分句型二）
As for me，I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers，for we students have much in common with young teachers．（高分句型三） 
Besides，most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work，which without doubt is beneficial to us students．（高分句型四）

解答 Opinions are divided on this question．Some students like elderly teachers'teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience．（高分句型一）What's more，elderly teachers tend to be more patient and careful with explanations．
       Some students，however，prefer to be taught by young teachers．In their views，young teachers are more energetic and enthusiastic．Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting．In addition，they are more ready to accept or create new ideas，including teaching．（高分句型二）
       As for me，I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers，for we students have much in common with young teachers．（高分句型三） They are our friends as well as teachers．Besides，most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work，which without doubt is beneficial to us students．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．