Question

9．最近，在一些学校，考试作弊、抄袭作业、说谎等校园不诚信现象越来越普遍．请你结合实际，用英语写一篇词数在120-150的短文，对这一现象进行描述和分析，并对如何消除校园不诚信行为发表自己的看法．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What we learn from the story is that we must be honest．
我们从这个故事中学到的道理是我们一定要诚实．
句首为what引导的主语从句，what在从句中作learn的宾语；is后面为that引导的表语从句．
高分句型二：
So measures must be taken to help students get rid of such dishonest behavior，making them really understand the lesson the English proverb，"No pains，no gains"，tries telling us．
所以一定要采取措施来帮助学生改掉不诚实的习惯，让他们明白这个英语谚语"不劳无获"试图告诉我们的道理．
本句的主句部分为一被动结构measures must be taken；后面的不定式为目的状语；making…为现在分词短语作目的状语；最后还有一个省略了引导词that或者which引导的定语从句the English proverb，"No pains，no gains"，tries telling us，用来修饰先行词the lesson．

解答 Recently，dishonest behavior，such as cheating in exams，copying answers when doing homework，telling lies to teachers is becoming wild spread among students in some schools．This has aroused wide concern．
   We have all heard the story．Here Comes the Wolf．What we learn from the story is that we must be honest．（高分句型一）Being dishonest does harm not only to others but also to oneself．Some students don't work hard to achieve their goals．Instead，they play computer games，chat on lines or play with their friends．When examination days come，they choose to cheat to get good results．
Honesty is the most important quality of a person．So measures must be taken to help students get rid of such dishonest behavior，making them really understand the lesson the English proverb，"No pains，no gains"，tries telling us．（高分句型二）

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