Question

中国人不善于向家人表达“爱”，但你认为告诉家人你爱他们很重要。请以“Ways to express love to my family”为题，写出如何向家人表达“爱”。
提示：1．如果父母生日，当面向他们说“我爱你们”‘
2．经常帮助家人做家务；
3．经常拥抱父母；
4．你自己的看法。
注意：1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Ways to express love to my family
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Answer 1

There are various ways to express love. I think saying “ I Love you ” on my father’s or mother’s birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them.
I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do, especially when they are tired after work, my parents must feel my love to them .
Besides, I will often give my parents a hug because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other, which does good to their health.
Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved and I think I will do so on some special days.

试题分析：本文是一篇说明文。文章给出了简单的汉语提示，文章话题贴近学生生活，让他们有话可说。成文时应注意：1.文章内容要点要齐全；（1）如果父母生日，当面向他们说“我爱你们”（2）经常帮助家人做家务；（3）经常拥抱父母；（4）你自己的看法。2.人称：第一人称为主；3.时态：一般现在时；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。
【亮点说明】使用了从句：1.I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do , especially when they are tired after work , my parents must feel my love to them . 2. because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other , which does good to their health .使用了动名词短语：Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved 使用了插入语：Besides