Question

书面表达（满分35分）
假设你是李华，上周六你班外出野炊时你发现很多同学使用一次性纸杯 (disposable cup)。请你就此问题按以下提示给某中学英语报社的编辑写一封信。
1. 野炊情况简介；
2. 发现的问题及其危害；
3. 你的倡议及理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；
3. 信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student in Ziyang, Sichuan. I am writing to tell you about an environmental problem.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student in Ziyang, Sichuan. I am writing to tell you about an environmental problem.
Last Saturday my classmates and I went for a picnic. At noon we had a wonderful lunch on the top of a mountain. To my surprise, I saw most of my classmates were using disposable cups, which I think this is a serious environmental problem.
As we all know, disposable cups are made of wood and the more cups we use, the more trees will be cut down to get the wood to make them. Therefore, it is never environmentally friendly to use disposable cups. I hope measures can be taken to forbid the use of disposable cups or use fewer. If everyone does so, we will have more trees and our world will become more beautiful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析根据要点内容，要求包括以下内容1. 野炊情况简介；2. 发现的问题及其危害；3. 你的倡议及理由。写作要有条理，结构合理。
野炊情况介绍时要注意用过去时，因为这是过去发生的事。To my surprise, I saw most of my classmates were using disposable cups, which I think this is a serious environmental problem.这句话中用了非限制性定语从句，指代上文的内容。发现的问题及其危害是普遍现象，用一般现在时，the more cups we use, the more trees will be cut down to get the wood to make them.“越…越….”的句型用的很恰当，it is never environmentally friendly to use disposable cups.这是it的句型。最后的倡议及理由用了I hope ….. If everyone does so, ……,
此外，写作时要求句与句之间要连贯，像这篇作文，As we all know， Therefore的使用，使文章自然连贯。