Question

14．近些年来，在中国，越来越多的农民迁人城市，他们为城市的发展做出很大贡献．他们生活在城市里，既有机遇，也有困难．请你根据下面表格中提示的内容，用英语写一篇 100词左右的短文．

具备品质	吃苦耐劳、助人为乐、勤俭持家
有益方面	学会技术、增加收人、生活得到改善
困难方面	住房、子女教育、医疗等
个人观点	政府应采取措施；美好祝愿

注意：
1．短文必须包括表格内所提示的全部要点；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；
4．词数：100词左右．
In China more and more peasants have moved to cities and have made great contributions to the development of the cities in recent years．______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With too many people coming to cities，some remain unemployed thus they can not afford to buy houses in cities．
高分句型二：
As far as I'm concerned，the government can do a lot to improve their conditions．
句型一 With too many people coming to cities 该部分使用了with的复合宾语结构，后面的动词使用了现在分词，即该动词与宾语many people 之间是主谓关系．
句型二 As far as I'm concerned，该句中使用了一个固定的句型，as far as sb be concerned 在某人看来

解答 In China，more and more farmers are moving to live in cities，so cities are becoming larger and larger．The farmers have chances in cities as well as difficulties．
    Of course there are more opportunities in cities so most of them can find jobs to earn a lot of money．Besides，their children can go to school to get a better education and have a brighter future．（有益方面）But at the same time，they have a lot of challenges．With too many people coming to cities，some remain unemployed thus they can not afford to buy houses in cities．（高分句型一）They have to pay more for education and medical treatment．And finally many of them end up living in poverty．（困难方面）
   As far as I'm concerned，the government can do a lot to improve their conditions．（高分句型二）More houses should be built and sold or rent to them cheaply．Their children's tuitions should also be reduced．Besides，they should enjoy equal medical insurance．
   I hope the farmers will be able to overcome their difficulties and live happily in cities．（个人观点）

点评 本文是一个图标类书面表达，写作时应注意观察图表所提供的信息，尽量要将其所列内容清楚表达；另外考生平时应注意积累相应的词汇，用准确的、简介的语言将作文表达清楚．