Question

【题目】寒假即将来临，你班同学在口语课上讨论假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇记述讨论内容的短文，并谈谈你的假期打算。

	优点	缺点
待在家中	舒适、能好好休息，和亲人、同学相聚	失去开阔眼界的机会
外出旅游	有机会和不同的人交流，丰富自己的经历	花费多，旅途不便

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：眼界horizon

The winter holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.____________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

The winter holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. After a tiring term, they believe it a convenient and comfortable way to relax. Besides, it’s traditional for them to get together with friends and relatives during the Spring Festival. But they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world. Others prefer to go out for traveling. They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. However, it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well.

In my opinion, it would be better to stay at home, for I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇习作考查图表作文中的表格作文。此类作文题材涉及广泛，本篇文章就选材考生非常熟悉的话题，及寒假如何度过。表格作文的提示通常一目了然，需要表达的信息一览无余，因此考生一般不会遗漏要点。但是表格类作文的提示通常是以不完整的汉语句子作为提示形式出现的，这就能够让考生在获得命题人所要求的信息的同时还有一定的发挥空间。本篇文章首先应该先叙述待在家中和外出旅游的优缺点，其次再说明自己的想法及理由。

【亮点说明】文章对于相同的意思善于使用不同的表达形式，如赞成既使用了短语in favor of又使用了prefer to do sth.，同时还使用了it would be better to do这样的句型。在说明原因时也是形式多变，值得考生注意和学习。