Question

4．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词． 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分．
Dear manager，
I'm one of your customer．The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop．Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right．When I got home，therefore，I found a fault with it．The problem is what the"Play"doesn't work at all．Probable it's not your fault and so is mine．Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person．
You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved．Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you accept my letter．

Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于一封投诉类的书信．作者前天在商店购买了一款随身听来帮助自己学习英语，在商场时好好的产品但是回到家后就不能用了，所以写信给商店经理，希望他能够给予最快的解决和答复，本文旨在向商家投诉产品质量．

解答 Dear manager，
    I'm one of your customer．The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your
                            customers
shop．Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right．When I got
                                did
home，therefore，I found a fault with it．The problem is what the"Play"doesn't
           however                                                              that
work at all．Probable it's not your fault and so is mine．Anyhow，I can't solve the
                   Probably                               neither/nor
problem in person．
      
You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait
                                              use
for too long before this problem is solved．Hopefully you will deal with the walkman
 
without delay，when you accept my letter．
                                      receive
    Hoping to hear ofyou in the earliest possible time!
                          from                                                    
                                                         Your sincerely，
                                                             Li Hua
1．customer-customers．前面的one指代其中之一，所以one of后面需要跟名词的复数形式；故答案为customers．
2．do-did．结合前后的时态可知，这是陈述的过去的事实，所以此处应该使用表示过去的助动词did；故答案为did．
3．therefore-however．后面一句I found a fault with it和前面一句everything was all right是相互矛盾的，所以应该是表示转折关系；故答案为however．
4．what-that．后面的句子为一个陈述句the"Play"doesn't work at all所以is后面缺少一个引导表语从句的引导词that；故答案为that．
5．Probable-Probably．后面是两个完整的句子，所以用来修饰句子的是副词，不能是形容词；故答案为probably．
6．so-neither/nor．and连接的为两个并列的成分，根据前面的否定词not可知，and后面的也应该是否定结构；故答案为neither/nor．
7．useful-use．本句考查句型be+of+名词，该句型相当于be+该名词对应的形容词，表示事物的性质如何；故答案为use．
8．wait for-wait．因为本句中没有宾语，所以不需要加介词for；故答案为wait．
9．accept-receive．本文属于投诉类的书信，所以应该是经理收到这封信时希望他能够给予重视和解决；故答案为receive．
10．of-from．hear from意为"收到某人的来信"，这是书信末尾的一种写信人的愿望；hear of意为"听说、听到"；故答案为from．

点评 本文属于短文改错类文章阅读．考生在做题时需理清文章的事理，注意词性、语态、时态的转换，分析句子结构．