Question

假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播

音员。你很想尝试一下，请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。

1. 对播音感兴趣，受过专业训练，梦想成为一名播音员；

2. 擅长英语，去年获得英语竞赛第一名；

3. 希望被录取。

注意： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir Or Madam，

I am Li Hua, a student in Grade 3

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I am looking forward to your early reply．

Yours，

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua. a student in Grade 3. I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so I’m writing to introduce myself.

First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Besides, I am good at English, and won the first prize in the English Speech Competition last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查自荐信的写作。主要围绕自荐当播音员，自荐信写作时要注意要将自己的优势有条理地列出。本文采用经典的三段论式写作方式。第一段主要介绍写信的目的，第二段列明自己的优势，最后一段收束全文。第一段第二句I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers使用了that领导的同位语从句；第二段第二 I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future.使用了非谓语动词做伴随状语；第二段倒数第二句If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students.使用了if领导的条件状语从句。本文从句使用数量恰到好处，不会显得十分累赘。在短语使用上，使用了First of all首先，be qualified for有资格，try ones best尽某人最大努力，等短语，都是十分常用的短语；本文词语使用上，亮点在于连接词的使用。比如第二段第三句Besides, I am good at English, and won the first prize in the English Speech Competition last year.首先使用了besides此外这一词，其次舍弃了从句的使用，使用了and这一连接词，就不会让人觉得从句使用过于累赘，又会增加句子简单易懂性，使文章十分出彩。总结：自荐信写作重点在于要有条理的清晰列明自己的优势。

考点：考查自荐信写作