Question

假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友李华打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：

1.语言是道硬门槛; 2.适应能力很重要; 3.兴趣爱好被看重; 4.要有社会责任感.

注意：词数100左右，开头和结束语已写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：适应 adapt to

Dear Li Hua,

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Yours,

Mike

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.

As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course. Besides , you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.

This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.                                        Yours

                                                           Mike

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友李华打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1.语言是道硬门槛; 2.适应能力很重要; 3.兴趣爱好被看重; 4.要有社会责任感.

需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.包含一个宾语从句；Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.包含了一个表语从句和一个宾语从句；As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course.包含一个非限制性定语从句；Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.包含一个定语从句。

考点：书信类书面表达