Question

15．火热的高三就在眼前，你准备好了吗？或许有时候，我们还可以向蚂蚁取取经呢！请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文．
The ant philosophy is：never give up，look ahead and do whatever you can．
注意：①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总字数．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达要求根据提示，结合生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文．写作前首先要正确理解提示信息"The ant philosophy is：never give up，look ahead and do whatever you can．"，挖掘要点，发挥想象来进行写作．提炼到的要点应该是遇到困难挫折不放弃，要对未来充满希望，脚踏实地工作．文章首先可以提出蚂蚁的哲学，然后亮出自己的观点，再结合事例进行论证．写作时文章应该用第一人称，使用一般现在时，讲解事例时应该使用一般过去时．注意高级词汇和多种句式的使用，这是文章的得分点所在．
【亮点说明】本文使用了议论文常见的写作模式-----三段式结构，首先提出论点only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals．，然后用自己的经历来论证，最后归纳总结．
高分句型一：
文中使用了定语从句There was a time when I suddenly became interested in playing badminton，曾经有一段时间我突然有兴趣打羽毛球．
高分句型二：
让步状语从句No matter what they said，I just kept on practicing almost every day after school．不管他们怎么说，我几乎每天放学后都坚持练习

解答 It is universally acknowledged that only with perseverance and optimism can we achieve our goals．
Take my own experience for example．There was a time when I suddenly became interested in playing badminton（高分句型一），but some of my classmates laughed at me saying that I would never play badminton well because I was too fat．No matter what they said，I just kept on practicing almost every day after school（高分句型二）．In order to improve my skill，I even consulted some professional players．With two years passing by，I won the champion of our school sports meeting．All the students and teachers congratulated me on my success．Moreover，I became slim and much healthier．
From my experience，I am firmly convinced that it was my determination，self-confidence and never giving-up that help me achieve my success．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．