Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jane and I had been friends since we are in kindergarten, but things were changed when we entered senior high school. Jane began to treat me in a unfriendly way, but she was very closely to some other girls. I kept wonder what was wrong with me. Then suddenly she started acting like my best friends again. Half of I wanted her back, but the other half said, “No, look at how she has done to you!” I decided have a talk with her and tell her how I felt. She said sorry for me, and now we are best friends again.

Answer 1

Jane and I had been friends since we are（1）were in kindergarten, but things were(2) （去掉）changed when we entered senior high school. Jane began to treat me in a (an)(3) unfriendly way, but she was very closely(4) (close) to some other girls. I kept wonder(5) wondering what was wrong with me. Then suddenly she started acting like my best friends (6) friend again. Half of I(7) me wanted her back, but the other half said, “No, look at how(8) what she has done to you!” I decided to (9) have a talk with her and tell her how I felt. She said sorry for(10) to me, and now we are best friends again.

1.are →were

2.去掉were

3.a→an

4.closely→close

5.wonder→wondering

6.friends→friend

7.I→me

8.how→what

9.decided →decided to

10.for→to

【解析】

试题分析：

1. →were 考查时态。该句的主句为过去完成时，since引导的从句要用过去的某种时态与之保持一致，故are →were。

2. 考查语态。change作“变化”讲时，是不及物动词；本句的主语things 和谓语动词change之间是主谓关系，故要用主动语态，不用被动语态。故去掉were。

3.→an 考查冠词。in a...way 以....的方式，unfriendly以元音因素开头，前面要用冠词an，故a→an。

4.→close 考查形容词。close 关系亲密的，密切的；closely 紧密地，挨近地；be close to sb.和某人关系密切。故closely→close。

5.→wondering 考查固定搭配。keep doing sth. 不停地做某事，keep后跟动词的ing形式，故wonder→wondering。

6.→friend 考查名词的单复数。此处是说她又开始像是我最好的朋友，她是一个人，“朋友”要用单数形式friend，故friends→friend。

7.→me 考查代词。of为介词，后面的人称代词要用宾格，I的宾格是me，故I→me。

8.→what 考查宾语从句。分析句子结构可知空缺处应为引导宾语从句的连接词；该宾语从句的谓语has done后缺少宾语，要用代词what充当，how是副词，在句中作状语，不能作宾语，故how→what。

9. →decided to 考查动词的搭配。decide to do sth.决定做某事，decide后跟动词不定式，故decided →decided to。

10.→to 考查固定短语。say sorry to sb.向某人道歉，要用介词to 而不是for，故for→to。

考点：考查短文改错