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【题目】假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My uncle was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, when I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My uncle also influenced me through nature walks. He often takes me for a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs and snake, and find fireflies in the sky. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my uncle and her influence on my life, I feel very lucky. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】the 改为a

【2】去掉was

【3】when改为where

【4】takes改为took

【5】snake改为snakes

【6】seemed 后加 to

【7】think改为thinking

【8】her改为his

【9】for改为from

【10】death改为dead

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题

【1】the 改为a; 这里不是定指，意思是我的叔叔是一位生物学教授，故改为a

【2】去掉was;本句已经有谓语动词了，这里的was是多余的，故去掉was

【3】when改为where; 这里修饰的是biology lab生物实验室，这是一个地点名词，要用where,故改为where

【4】takes改为took;本文讲述的是过去的事情，全文用到的都是过去时，故改为took

【5】snake改为snakes;snake蛇是可数名词，前面用了frogs，这里应该保持一致要用复数形式，故改为snakes

【6】seemed 后加 to; seem to 似乎，好象；看起来;题意：他好像知道一切的野外动植物。故后加to

【7】think改为thinking ; 句子主语是I，谓语动词是feel,这里要用非谓语动词，用ing形式表示主动，故改为thinking

【8】her改为his；my uncle是男士，所以不能用her,故改为his

【9】for改为from; learn from somebody 向……学习，故改为from

【10】death改为dead; 前面用到的是形容词alive ,这里相对应的应该用形容词dead 无生命的，故改为dead