Question

【题目】国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。

内容包括：

1.自我简介 2.写信目的 3.我们应该感恩（thankful） 4.推荐的理由 5.预祝活动成功

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. As a matter of fact, I often visit your website. I am delighted to know that you are collecting topics faced with middle school students to make a new round of courses. I would like to participate in this activity by recommending to you a topic, which is “we should be thankful”.

Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to. First of all, we should be thankful to our parents, for it was they who brought us into this world. Also, we should be thankful to our teachers, for they taught us knowledge. And most important of all, we should be thankful to our friends ,for they always give us a hand whenever we are in trouble. What I want to say is that every one of us lives in a grateful world.

I hope that the activity will be a great success.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义，符合中学实际引导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点：紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩”； 但自我简介、写信目录、推荐的理由、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开；注意分清段落层次，上下文的过渡。

【亮点说明】

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