Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你在网上看到你所在的城市的一个英语培训中心招生暑期助教，请根据以下

要点写一封英语申请信，内容包括

1 申请原因；

2 自我优势（口语能力，组织能力，沟通能力）；

3 希望获准。

注意：1. 词数 100 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：助教 teaching assistant

Dear sir/ Madam,

I`m glad to see your advertisement on the internet.

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I’m glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. (I `m) Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I’m writing to apply for the position.

In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself. Devoted

to learning English for years, I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English. Besides, being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer, which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently. Most importantly, many of my teachers describe me as “responsible and diligent”, and I believe these good qualities contribute to cooperating well in a team.

I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely

LiHua

【解析】

考查提纲类作文。本文要求考生以李华的身份申请成为某一英语培训中心暑期助教。本文的要点均已经给出，要点有3点，但考生不要逐句翻译，要使用考生自己熟悉的句式和短语，文章使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。

本文要点完整，结构合理，写作技巧娴熟，能熟练地运用多种加分技能。文章中广泛使用多个高级词汇，如apply for，seize this opportunity，be devoted to，be equal to…，be capable of，contribute to…等；运用了顺序连接词如Besides等，同时文章中还使用了较多的高级语法结构。本文中大量使用非谓语，文中的非谓语做状语有三处：Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I’m writing to apply for the position；In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize to…。和Devoted to learning English for years, I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English. 非谓语做主语being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organize。以及并列句：Most importantly, many of my teachers describe me as “responsible and diligent”, and I believe these good qualities contribute to cooperating well in a team此外，复合句运用的也很多，如定语从句.... which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently；代词it的在复合句中的特殊用法I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration．这些技巧的使用让文章加分不少