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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week our class voted on how to do for you class outing: visit the Singapore Zoo and go to the Night Safari(夜间动物园). We girls wanted to go to the zoo, but since we are in minority, we lost to the boys, that all wanted the safari. We got the admission rate for the students, which was great since I still had not enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as something at the souvenir shops. The safari was scary(吓人的)but real fun. As we took the ride across the park’s dark jungle, we could see the eyes of many creatures look at us. Most of the animal there sleep when there sunlight and wake up at night.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文主要讲述在一次班级活动中，女生票数不敌男生，最终全班一起去了夜间动物园的事情，虽然夜间动物园很吓人，但是很有趣。

“Last week our class voted on how to do for you class outing”，分析句子结构，vote on为动词短语， to do for you class outing为从句，且从句缺少主语，故将how 改为what 。

“visit the Singapore Zoo and go to the Night Safari(夜间动物园)”，根据前文的投票，可知是在两者之间进行选择，故将and 改为or。

“We girls wanted to go to the zoo, but since we are in minority, we lost to the boys”，根据wanted可知，句子时态为过去时态，故将are改为were。

“we lost to the boys, that all wanted the safari”，分析句子结构，we lost to the boys为主句，all wanted the safari为从句，all指代boys，主句与从句之间用逗号隔开，应使用非限制性定语从句，故将that改为which。

“We got the admission rate for the students, which was great”，分析句子结构，先行词为主语We，故将which改为who。

“since I still had not enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as something at the souvenir shops”，根据buy a brochure about the park as well as something at the souvenir shops我买了小册子还有一些纪念品，可知作者还是有钱的，故将not删掉。

“ The safari was scary(吓人的)but real fun”，fun为形容词，应使用副词修饰，故将real改为really。

“As we took the ride across the park’s dark jungle”，through强调从人群或物体中间穿过，across指在某一空间从一端到另一端或呈十字交叉穿过，本句讲的是从公园中穿过，故将across改为through。

“we could see the eyes of many creatures look at us”，see sb/sth doing sth 看见某人/物正在做某事，故将look改为looking。

“Most of the animal there sleep when there sunlight and wake up at night”，根据most of大多数，后面加可数名词复数形式，故将animal改为animals。