Question

16．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom发来一封电子邮件询问你的暑期计划和安排．请根据以下内容给他回信．
1．完成作业并多读书；2．打篮球、健身或者有时候参加社区活动；
3．结识更多同龄朋友；4．其他（如参加实践活动等）．
词数：120个左右（开头与结尾已给出）
Dear Tom，
                                                          
That's all．Best wishes for you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是提纲类作文，因为讨论的是暑假的安排，所以主要用一般将来时和一般现在时，用第一人称．文章主要分成两部分，一 点明要写的主要目的；二 叙述暑假安排．其中第二部分是重点．
高分句型
1．I need to finish my homework assigned by teachers，which is the most important point in my view．
我需要完成老师布置的作业，我认为这是最重要的一点．句子中which引导定语从句，代指主句的含义．
2．If I have more free time I'll take part in social activities to learn experience through them．
如果我有更多的时间，我会参加一些社会活动来学习一些经验．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm delighted to chat with you about my plans and arrangements in the summer holiday（点明要写的主要目的）．
First，I need to finish my homework assigned by teachers，which is the most important point in my view（高分句型一）．And I will choose to read my favorite novels as many as possible．Moreover，I'd like to play basketball to keep fit and maybe take part in an exciting basketball match in our neighborhood．In addition，I'll make more friends with foreign students of the same age on the Internet．If I have more free time I'll take part in social activities to learn experience through them（高分句型二）．（假期安排）
That's all．Best wishes for you（写信套语）．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 在文章里用了表达先后关系的连接词First（首先），Moreover（再者），In addition（此外），这使得文章条理清楚，我们还可以用first of all，what's more，besides，above all等等．