Question

4．假设有一批加拿大中学生将来你校就读，校方要求你在开学典礼上介绍一下学校的有关规则．请按以下要点写一篇发言稿．词数120左右，开头和结尾已为你写好．

穿戴	佩校章，穿校服
作息	不迟到，不早退：上午7：45上课，下午5：30放学
环境卫生	放学后扫地，保持校园清洁
交通	若要骑车上学，需办理自行车许可证

提示：校章school badge   　   校服  school uniform  许可证 permit
Good morning，dear friends．Welcome to our school．
                                             
Thanks．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
（一）it must be made clear that the class begins at 7：30 and ends at 4：30…
此句型是被动结构，主动为make it clear that…，it 做形式宾语，that从句是真正的宾语．
（二）The school is a place for us to live and study in，so we must sweep the floor to keep it clean and tidy．
此句型用了动词不定式to live and study in 做定语修饰place．
在列举规则时，使用了过渡词，如：firstly，Secondly，Lastly
短语：be expected to，It must be made clear that…，keep it clean and tidy．

解答 Good morning，dear friends．Welcome to our school．
Now please allow me to introduce some of our school rules to you here．As high school students，firstly，we are expected to wear the school badge and school uniform when at school．（介绍规则一）Secondly，（高分句型一） it must be made clear that the class begins at 7：30 and ends at 4：30 and we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over．（高分句型二）The school is a place for us to live and study in，so we must sweep the floor to keep it clean and tidy．（介绍规则二） Lastly，if you want to go to school by bike，you must have a bicycle-permit．（介绍规则三）
Thanks．

点评 考生在写图表作文时，首先要读清表格里全部信息，不能遗漏要点，在组织时注意过渡词的使用，尽可能使用不同句式．