Question

12．某中学英语报社正在针对"如何过一个有意义的暑假"进行讨论．假设你是李华，请你用英语写出你暑假最想做的三件事及其理由，向该报投稿．
注意：1．词数100左右；
      2．开头和结尾已给出（但不计入总词数）；
  3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
  4．文章不得出现真实的人名与校名．
Dear editor，
To spend a meaningful summer vacation，I plan as follow．                                      
Best wishes，
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇书信类作文，要求写一篇关于"如何过一个有意义的暑假"的文章，要求包含暑假最想做的三件事及其理由，向该报投稿．写作内容应该包括：写信目的；最想做的事情；想做该事的原因．审题时注意本文应使用第一人称，时态应使用一般现在时，一般将来时．
重要短语：
as follow（如下）；as we all know（众所周知）；of great significance（有重大意义）；broaden one's horizon（扩宽某人的视野）；make good use of（充分利用）；decide to（决定做…）
高分句型：
1．As we all know，good health is the corner stone of our study and work．该句运用比喻的修辞，生动形象．
2．At the same time，I'll also do some reading，which will also benefit me lot．该句灵活运用短语，并使用非限制性定语从句．
3．Not only can I gain more knowledge but also it can broaden my horizons．该句使用"not only…，but also…"句型及broaden one's horizon短语．
4．All in all，summer holiday is precious and I will make good use of it．灵活运用短语简明扼要的做出总结．
5．Apart from the above，I decide to do some housework or serve as a volunteer to help the farmers with their farm work，through which I can also experience the happiness of being diligent and helpful．运用多个短语，高级词汇及非限制性定语从句．

解答 Dear editor，
To spend a meaningful summer vacation，I plan as follows．（写信目的） Firstly，I'll take plenty of exercise．As we all know，good health is the corner stone of our study and work．Thus it is of great significance for us to do some physical exercise．At the same time，I'll also do some reading，which will also benefit me lot．Not only can I gain more knowledge but also it can broaden my horizons．Apart from the above，I decide to do some housework or serve as a volunteer to help the farmers with their farm work，through which I can also experience the happiness of being diligent and helpful．（写出想做的事情及理由）
All in all，summer holiday is precious and I will make good use of it．（总结）
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 对于英语书信类的写作要开篇点明写信的目的，写出自己暑假的打算及如何使之有意义，要以真诚恳切的态度打动读信的人，在写作过程中要注意灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述，合理地使用过渡语和连贯词，使得整篇文章过渡自然，衔接紧密．