Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画横线（—），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

When the earthquake was happened in 2008 my aunt was still a little girl in small county in Sichuan. Today, she can well remember doctors and nurses in white overalls which were busy day and night save the injured in our hometown. It was then when she made up her mind to be someone like them. Her dream came truly after she graduated from a local medical school. On January 2020, when bad news came that Hubei was badly in need of doctors and nurses to fight COVID-19, she applied to be there to help out but her application was approved. Before she leaves, she told us she was grateful for what people did for us after the earthquake and that she had decided to pay them forward.

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉was

2.small前添加a

3.which→who/that

4.save→saving

5.when→that

6.truly→true

7.On→In

8.but→and

9.leaves→left

10.them→it

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。主要介绍了作者的阿姨在2008年地震时被日夜忙碌抢救伤员的医生和护士所启发，决心成为像他们那样的人，后来她在当地一所医学院毕业，并在2020年主动加入抗击新冠肺炎的工作中。

1.考查动词用法。动词happen表示“发生”没有被动语态。故去掉was。

2.考查冠词。county为可数名词，此处表示泛指应用不定冠词，且small为辅音音素开头的单词，故small前添加a。

3.考查定语从句。此处为定语从句修饰先行词doctors and nurses，且先行词在从句中做主语，指人，应用关系代词who或that，which指物。故which改为who/that。

4.考查非谓语动词。根据短语be busy doing sth.表示“忙于做某事”。故save改为saving。

5.考查强调句。句意：就在那时，她下定决心要成为像他们那样的人。分析句子结构可知此处为强调句结构“it be+被强调部分+that/who+其他”，且本句中被强调部分为then，故应用that。故when改为that。

6.考查形容词。根据短语dream come true表示“梦想成真”。故truly改为true。

7.考查介词。根据后文January 2020可知表示“在几月”应用介词in，句首字母要大写。故On改为In。

8.考查连词。句意：她申请去那里帮忙，她的申请被批准了。结合句意可知上下文为承接关系，应用and。故but改为and。

9.考查动词时态。此处描述的是过去发生的动作，应用一般过去时。故leaves改为left。

10.考查代词。句意：临走前，她告诉我们，她很感激地震后人们为我们所做的一切，她已经决定把它传递下去。此处指代上文what people did应用代词it。故them改为it。