Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字及图标，并按照要求用英语写一篇150字左右的文章。

1.Hold fast to dreams For if dreams die life is a broken-winded bird That can never fly. Hold,fast to dreams For when dreams go Life is a barren field From only with snow	2.Strong belief is everything in wishing.If you don’t believe in your own power to make your wish come true,your wish will fly away,never to be seen again.If you’re wishing for something possible,then it may be possible for you to do whatever you need to make it come true.The ultimate magic is not wishing,but doing.
3.Once a teacher received a paper from a boy where he described the dream of owning a 200-acrc horse ranch and a large house.He graded it with a red F,thinking it was an unrealistic dream.Though asked to change it (he boy stated,“You can keep the F and I’ll keep my dream.” Many years later,the boy made it a reality.	■ 85% have a dream ■ 78% have a dream but give up ■ 7％ have a dream and realize it

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2.结合上述信息，简要阐述坚持梦想的重要性；

3.谈谈你的梦想 ，并分析实现梦想的必要要素（不少于两点）。

【写怍要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称：

3.不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Most people have a dream but those who make it a reality are few and far between. Therefore , what counts is to have the same determination as the boy did.

Life without a dream proves to be a frozen field. However, the dream turns out to be an empty slogan unless you devote the constant efforts to fulfilling it. Nobody can achieve anything without persistence. Accordingly, one of the secret to success is holding fast to your dream whatever it happens.

I have a dream that one day I can make a commitment to the education in the remote places where children are thirsty for knowledge. I hope that my devotion will make a difference to their lives. To realize the dream not only should I equip myself with abundant knowledge but also inspire more people to join me in helping those poor children .After all , many hands make light work.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。根据阅读题干可知：a.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；b.结合上述信息，简要阐述坚持梦想的重要性；c.谈谈你的梦想 ，并分析实现梦想的必要要素（不少于两点）。

同时要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3.注意逻辑性，既要阐述坚持梦想的重要性，又要阐述实现梦想的重要因素。

【范文亮点】

1. 文章层次分明，要点齐全，既论述了梦想的重要性，又结合自身实际谈论了应如何实现梦想。

2.此外，文章还运用了＂To realize the dream not only should I equip myself with abundant knowledge but also inspire more people to join me in helping those poor children .＂倒装句以及“Most people have a dream but those who make it a reality are few and far between.”定语从句。