Question

【题目】假设你是双鸭山市第一中学高一新生李华，你的朋友Tom来信询问这一个月以来让你印象最深的老师。请你根据以下要点介绍一下你的英语老师Ms Gao：
1). 2000年大学毕业，同年来我校工作；
2).热爱教育事业，精力充沛；教学方法灵活多样，课堂生动有趣，深受学生好评；对学生要求严格且有耐心；
3).在她的帮助下，学生们的英语都取得了进步；学生们认为有Ms Gao教他们，他们都能被重点大学录取。
注意：1).词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2).可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your email
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I'm glad to receive your letter asking me about the teacher who impressed me most in the past month. Now let me introduce Ms Gao to you.

Ms Gao, my English teacher, graduated from college in 2000 and came to our school to work in the same year. Strict but patient, she is enthusiastic about teaching and energetic. To make us understand English well, she uses different kinds of teaching methods, which makes her classes lively and interesting. Besides, whenever we have problems with English, she explains grammar so clearly that even I can understand it easily. With her help, all of us have made great progress in English. We all appreciate her help and respect her very much. It is believed that with Ms Gao teaching us all of us are sure to be admitted into key universities in three years.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给Tom写一封信，介绍你的英语老师，属于提纲类作文，写作要点已经给出，内容包括：

1). 2000年大学毕业，同年来我校工作；2).热爱教育事业，精力充沛；教学方法灵活多样，课堂生动有趣，深受学生好评；对学生要求严格且有耐心；

3).在她的帮助下，学生们的英语都取得了进步；学生们认为有Ms Gao教他们，他们都能被重点大学录取。写作时考生注意书信的特点、文章的时态，同时尝试使用高级词汇，过渡句和连接词，使文章行文连贯，可读性强。