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     Steve Jobs, the godfather of Apple, was born in San Francisco,
California, the USA on February 24th,1955 and passed away on October
5th, 2011. He graduated from Homestead High SchooL He was an
inventor, entrepreneur and former CEO of Apple Company, with iPod,
iPhone, iPad and so on as his masterpieces. Jobs made a great
contribution to the transformation of modern means of communication,
entertainment and lifestyle. It was he who led the trend of global
information technology and electronic products, enabling the once rare
and expensive electronic products to become part of people's life in
modern times.
     Jobs is always considered as a great example that I should follow,
whose deeds encourage us to follow our passion and we will achieve our
dream in time.
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