分析 根据题目可孩子是要描述网购在高中生中很受欢迎,以及网购的问题和对此的建议,所以用一般现在时描述即可;根据内容可知是描述高中生喜欢网购,所以人称用第三人称复数即可.根据题干中所给的三个方面进行描述:
1.越来越多(more and more)的高中生喜欢在网上购买商品(buy products online);
2.网上购物可能存在的问题:此部分与上文形成转折关系,故开头可加入表示转折的连词,如:however,but等,然后就具体的问题展开描述,如:信息安全(information security);不能看到实物,商品质量(the quality of the objects)无法保证(can not be guaranteed)等.
3.你的建议:加强管理(reinforce the management)或制定相关法律(relevant laws)等让网上购物更加安全.
解答 Online Shopping
Nowadays,shopping through the Internet has been becoming increasingly popular among senior school students and they prefer to buy almost everything they want online.(高分句型)
Online shopping,however,can sometimes bring headaches to students when they enjoy shopping online.Firstly,the quality of the objects may not be as good as they are described and it is possible for them to buy fake goods.(高分句型)In addition,some students find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the commodities bought online.(高分句型)
I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out to screen and check Internet shopping providers.If so,I believe a promising online shopping is just awaiting us.(高分句型)
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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