Question

7．当前不少文学作品被改编成电影．有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著．请你以"Film or book，which do you prefer？"为题按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1．看电影：省时、有趣、易懂
2．读原著：细节更多、语言优美
3．我的看法及理由
注意：
1．词数80-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）．
2．参考词汇：original work 或 book in the original （原著）
Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息当前不少文学作品被改编成电影．有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著．请你以"Film or book，which do you prefer？"为题按照下列要点写一篇英语短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂；读原著：细节更多、语言优美；我的看法及理由 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Besides另外；Meanwhile同时；Personally就个人而言；Actually事实上； In a word总之；what's more而且；agree with同意；
The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story．（高分句型一）
I think I can stay at home，reading quietly in a situation of my own，and what's more，I am able to better understand the author's ideas．In a word，to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it．（高分句型二）

解答 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original．The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story．（高分句型一）Besides，the film is usually more interesting，and it is easier to follow．
       Some others have just the opposite opinion．They think that they can get more detailed information from the original．Meanwhile，the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful．
       Personally，I agree with the second view．Actually I have more reasons for it．I think I can stay at home，reading quietly in a situation of my own，and what's more，I am able to better understand the author's ideas．In a word，to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it．（高分句型二）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．