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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

John is a tall man weighing as much as 100 kilogram. Though he is large, but he fears dogs. One day he was taking walk when a dog suddenly appeared from nowhere. He became so nervous that he ran as fast as he can. The dog kept run after him and it was getting closer. In the dangerous situation,John decides to climb up a tree to avoid the dog. Unfortunately, it was not a easy job. He hadn’t gone up very high when the dog stood right above the tree. The dog jumped up and bit it’s teeth into his bottom. John fell right onto the dog’s head, that killed it immediately.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】kilogram→kilograms

【2】去掉but

【3】taking后加a

【4】can→could

【5】run→running

【6】decides→decided

【7】a→an

【8】above→under

【9】it’s→its

【10】that→which

【解析】

【1】kilogram→kilograms 考查名词的单复数。kilogram前有100，所以要用复数kilograms。故kilogram改为kilograms。

【2】去掉but 考查连词。though和but不能连用，故去掉but。

【3】taking后加a 考查固定短语。take a walk散步；故taking后加a。

【4】can→could 考查情态动词。根据本句话中的became可知，用一般过去时，故can改为could。

【5】run→running 考查动词短语。keep doing继续做某事，故run改为running。

【6】decides→decided 考查动词的时态。根据上文it was getting closer可知用一般过去时，故decides改为decided。

【7】a→an 考查冠词。an easy job“一份简单的工作”，easy为元音音素开头，要加不定冠词的话应加an。故a改为an。

【8】above→under 考查介词。句意：当一只狗站在树下时，他还没有爬到很高处。故above改为under。

【9】it’s→its 考查代词。句意：狗跳起来，咬到他的下面；故it’s改为its。

【10】that→which 考查定语从句。非限制性定语从句不能用that引导，根据关系词代指前面整句话的内容，故把that改为which。