Question

假设你是李华，下面是你的美国网友Alice发给你的一封电子邮件。

Dear Li Hua,

How are you getting along recently? I miss you very much, especially when I’ve met some difficulties in my studying of Chinese.

As you know, I’ve taught myself Chinese for more than half a year, but I can’t even read Chinese newspapers or magazines. I’m almost giving it up. Would you please give me some advice on how to study Chinese well? Thank you.

Yours ever,

Alice

请你根据来信内容写一封100词左右的回信，内容包括：

1. 对她的来信做出符合英美习惯的礼貌答复；

2. 回答她提出的问题；（至少两条建议）

3. 你的祝愿。

请你用英语给Alice写一封回信，回答她的提问。

注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Dear Alice,

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Best wishes!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Alice,

I’m glad to receive your email. Everything is going well with me. Thank you for asking. As for how to study Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions based on my experience.

Chinese is an ancient language and it is rich in words and cultural contents, so you should first try to learn some useful words and phrases and their cultural backgrounds. Second, it is a hard job to learn a foreign language well, so learn Chinese step by step and never be too anxious. Third, you must have confidence and never give it up. Last, practice is the best way to learn Chinese. I think we can talk in Chinese on the phone, or you can write letters in Chinese as often as you can.

May you succeed!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据Alice的来信给她写一封回信，给她提一些学习汉语的建议。写作要点包括：礼貌答复来信；至少提出两条建议；表达自己的祝愿这三个方面。词数在100词左右，注意书信的格式；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了宾语从句、固定句型等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句①how to study Chinese well，②we can talk in Chinese on the phone；固定句型it is a hard job to learn a foreign language well等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用first, and, so, second, third, last, or等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了be glad to do, go well with, as for, I’d like to, based on, be rich in, try to, give up, step by step, as often as you can等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：书信类作文