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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Friday, we went to Beijing Survival Island to go on an outing, that left us with a deep impression.

Early in the morning, we gathered the school gate and the school bus takes us there. In the way, we talked and laughed, full of excitement. Upon arrive, we were attracted by various activities and got involved immediate. The monkey bars were really challenging. One of the boys managed to make it with the encouragement of her classmates. I was interested in making cakes. I was being taught to make my first cake on my own! At lunchtime, we sat around, enjoying the delicious food. Everyone had the good time.

We really enjoyed our stay there. Before we left, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable days.

Answer 1

【答案】that left us ... that 改成 which

gathered the school gate ... gathered后加at

the school bus takes ... takes 改成 took

In the way ... In 改成 On

Upon arrive ... arrive 改成 arrival / arriving

got involved immediate. immediate 改成 immediately

her classmates. her 改成 his

I was being taught ... 去掉being

had the good time. the 改成 a

unforgettable days. days 改成 day

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了上周五我们到北京无人岛上游玩的一次经历。

第一处：考查定语从句。这个定语从句的先行词是an outing，关系代词which指代先行词，引导非限制性定语从句，在句中做主语。

第二处：考查介词。本句中动词gather意为“聚集”，是一个不及物动词，后面不能直接加宾语，需要添加介词at。句意：上午的早些时候，我们在校门口集中。

第三处：考查时态。本文讲述的是上个星期五发生的事情，全文都是一般过去时，所以本句使用过去式took。

第四处：考查固定短语。短语on the way在路上；in the way妨碍；句意：在路上，我们说啊，笑啊，非常兴奋。

第五处：考查宾语。在英语在，介词的后面要接名词或动名词做宾语，本句中arrive是动词，所以使用动名词arriving或名词arrival做宾语。

第六处：考查副词。在英语中副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子。本句中副词immediately做状语修饰动词短语got involved。

第七处：考查代词。本句的主语是One of the boys，是男性，所以使用his指代，而her指代女性。

第八处：考查语态。本句并没有强调过去正在进行的事情，所以不需要使用过去进行时。句意：我被教第一处自己做蛋糕。

第九处：考查固定句式。句式have a good time玩得开心。

第十处：考查名词单复数。根据第一段可知本文介绍上周五发生的事情，上周五我们度过了令人难忘的一天。不可能使用复数形式days。