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3．假定你是中学生李津．一个来自英国的中学生代表团在你校举办英语文化节（English Culture festival）期 间来访，并受邀观看英文戏剧表演（English Drama Show）．请你根据以下写作要点与要求代表学校写一篇欢迎辞：
1）表示对客人的欢迎；
2）介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容、时间、地点等）
3）表达对客人的祝愿．
注意：
1）词数：不少于100；
2）可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3）开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear British guests，
It's my great honour to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school．We are excited to have you here during our English Culture Festival．
As scheduled，we have English Drama Show this evening．The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening．Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．（活动介绍）（高分句型一）The show will begin at eight o'clock tonight in the school hall．Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in it．I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence．
We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．（表达祝愿）（高分句型二）

Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息一个来自英国的中学生代表团在你校举办英语文化节（English Culture festival）期 间来访，并受邀观看英文戏剧表演（English Drama Show）．请你根据以下写作要点与要求代表学校写一篇欢迎辞，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：1）表示对客人的欢迎；2）介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容、时间、地点等）3）表达对客人的祝愿．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
高分句型一：
Most of the plays thaty we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．
高分句型二：
We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．
句型一 Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors…该句中有一个由that引导的定语从句，that在从句中作宾语，替代前面出现的先行词plays
句型二 We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．该句中hope 后面跟了一个省略了引导词的宾语从句：you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here
此外，该书面表达还用了以下重要句型和高级词汇：it is+adj+to do sth      benefit…from

解答 Dear British guests，
      It's my great honour to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school．We are excited to have you here during our English Culture Festival．
      As scheduled，we have English Drama Show this evening．The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening．Most of the plays that we will perform are by classic British authors，such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens．（活动介绍）（高分句型一）The show will begin at eight o'clock tonight in the school hall．Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in it．I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence．
      We hope you'll have a pleasant time during your stay here．（表达祝愿）（高分句型二）
      Thank you．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．