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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today, my presentation is about A-Long, a online painter, and his paintings. A-Long is fond of Chinese national treasures, the giant panda. Recently, she has combined the panda image with various internationally famous paintings, caused Internet excitement, He has been planning to do these creative paintings for some time, and are glad that So many people like their style. After all, Chinese giant pandas are born to be models and can be easily adapted so many oil paintings. He paid attention to Chinese traditional paintings, and western masterpieces as well as. His strong belief is what the Chinese panda matches good not only the Chinese style elements but also the world culture.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文是一篇人物说明类文章。本文主要介绍了一位网上画家A-Long的绘画风格及艺术成就。

第一处：考查冠词。泛指“一位网上画家”，且online首字母发音是元音，所以用不定冠词an，a改成 an。

第二处：考查名词单复数。treasure当“宝物”讲时，是不可数名词，所以treasures改成treasure。

第三处：考查代词。由前文“and his paintings.”可判断出A-Long是男的，所以she改成he。

第四处：考查非谓语动词。cause与其逻辑主语he之间是主动关系，用现在分词，所以caused 改成causing。

第五处：考查主谓一致。主语是“he”是单数，所以谓语动词用单数，are改成is。

第六处：考查固定短语。adapt for使适合于，是固定短语，所以adapted之后加for。

第七处：考查时态。表示主语现在的状态，用一般现在时，所以paid改成pays。

第八处：考查固定短语。他关注中国的传统绘画，也关注西方的巨作。as well是固定短语，所以去掉as。

第九处：考查表语从句。that the Chinese panda matches good not only the Chinese style elements but also the world culture.作is之后的表语，所以that the Chinese panda matches good not only the Chinese style elements but also the world culture.是一个表语从句，引导词在从句中不作任何成分，也没有什么实际意义，所以what改成that。

第十处：考查副词。修饰动词matches，用副词，所以good改成well。