Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的笔友李明来信说由于他的父母工作变动他刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，他在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。

注意：词数100左右

1.与某人交朋友 make friends with sb.

2.依我看 in my opinion

3.与某人谈心 have a talk with sb

4.参加某人……活动 join sb. in...

5.分享快乐 share the happiness with somebody

Dear Li Ming,

I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school, which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf.

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I hope you will find true friendship soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Ming,

I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school, which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf. Do not worry if you have no real friends right now. Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips. First of all, you can make friends with others if you share their joys and sorrows. Secondly, you should open your heart to your friends, holding back nothing. Last but not least, once you have a friend, you must constantly maintain your friendship with acts of kindness.

I hope you will find true friendship soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查书信类作文。首先要认真审题，假如你是李华，你的笔友李明来信说由于他的父母工作变动他刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，他在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。其次要确定时态，表示经常或反复发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，文章开头简要说明自己已经了解到李明所面临的问题，接着告诉李明不要担心，并就此给出自己的建议。文章最后祝福李明在不久的将来可以收获真正的友谊。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如：I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school, which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf.这里含有一个宾语从句和一个非限制性定语从句。First, Second, Last but not least的使用让文章条理清晰。