Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国好友Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游，想先学习一些中文，却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他，用英语给他写一封邮件告诉他你的建议。内容包括：

1. 你给他的学习建议；

2. 介绍你帮助他的计划；

3. 对结果的展望。

注意：1) 词数100词左右；

2) 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Delighted to hear that you are going to take a trip to China in August and especially want to learn some Chinese first before coming. Here, I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dialogues as a start, like greeting people, asking for directions and so on, which can help you a lot during your trip.

Learning Chinese needs great effort. I’d like to be your teacher and send you an e-book with my teaching schedule later. Besides, let’s have an online class over the Internet every weekend, through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是建议信属于应用文。建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出的建议要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。写作时，要注意意思要连贯，符合逻辑。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有文采。

亮点：本文，语言恰当，委婉礼貌。要点完整，，句意连贯。文中既有简单句又有复杂句，同时多种复合句交替使用，给文章增添了档次。如复杂句I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start, like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs, which can help you a lot during your trip，这里含有一个宾语从句和一个非限制性定语从句。复杂句Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend, through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.这个复杂句中含有一个非限制性定语从句的并列句。