Question

16．对每个人而言，学习是非常重要的．请你以Being a Successful Learner为题，根据下表的提示，写一篇短文．词数：120左右．

学习的重要性	1．科技发展的需要 2．激烈的社会竞争 3．…
成功的学习者的共同之处	独立、主动、目的明确、学以致用
你的看法	怎样成为成功的学习者（至少两点）： 1．… 2．…

参考词汇：individual 个人的    fierce激烈的
注意：短文的开头已写，不计入总数．
Being a Successful Learner
Study is very important for every individual because we                           

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文，让我们以Being a Successful Learner为题，写一篇短文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：学习的重要性；成功的学习者的共同之处；你的看法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为学习的重要性．第二部分为成功的学习者的共同之处．第三部分为作者的看法．
重点短语与句型：
keep pace with  跟上； 并驾齐驱； 赶上；
equip oneself with 装备，配备
attitude towards 对待…的态度
as the saying goes正如谚语所说
keep a good balance between 保持好的平衡
高分句型一：They know themselves well and have the ability to apply what they have learnt to practice．此句用了what they have learnt 引导宾语从句
高分句型二：In my opinion，first of all，we should develop our interest in study，as the saying goes，"Interest is the best teacher．"此句 as the saying goes中as引导定语从句，"正如"

解答 Study is very important for every individual because we have to acquire new and advanced knowledge to keep pace with the rapid development of science and technology．The fierce competition pushes every one of us to seize every opportunity to study．And as the future generation of China，we should equip ourselves with rich knowledge to make our country stronger and more powerful．（学习的重要性）
What makes successful learners？Successful learners are similar in many ways．They are independent thinkers and take an active and positive attitude towards their study．Besides，they have clear goals in mind．They know themselves well and have the ability to apply what they have learnt to practice（高分句型一）（成功的学习者的共同之处．）
How can we be successful learners？In my opinion，first of all，we should develop our interest in study，as the saying goes，"Interest is the best teacher．"（高分句型二） Second，we should form the habit of making plans for our study and keeping a good balance between study and entertainment．Last but not the least，remember not to depend on our teachers or textbooks only．（作者的看法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧