Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你最近乘火车旅游了。请你写封邮件，与你的美国朋友Peter分享你的乘火车经历。
内容包括：1.网上买票，车站取票；2.乘车体验：舒适放松，沿途观景；3.列车上饮食。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'd like to tell you that I had an excellent train ride recently.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter, I'd like to tell you that I had an excellent trains ride recently. I had bought my train ticket online ahead of time. It is so convenient for people to buy train tickets now. Before I got on the train, I picked up my ticket from the machine with my identity care. Sitting on the train, I felt comfortable and relaxed. I enjoyed the scenery outside the window, which made me excited. With the train running fast, the landscapes changed quickly. There is a dining car on the train but the meals are very expensive. So I only ate my own food. I really enjoyed myself during the train trip. Look forward to your travel experience.

Yours,

Li Hua
【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Peter写封信，分享本次出游的乘火车经历。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，完整描述三方面内容：网上购票，车站取票、乘车体验、列车饮食。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般过去时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：出发前网上买票，车站取票；第二段：乘车体验和列车饮食；第三段：结束语。