Question

15．假设你是李津．你校英语校刊正在举办"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法．
短文应包含以下要点：
1．电子书的优势（如便宜，容易携带，节省空间等）；
2．纸质书的优势（如对眼睛伤害较少）；
3．谈谈你的看法．
注意：
1．词数：不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯：
3．文章开头已为你写好，不计入词数．
There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between…There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books．
（高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．（电子书的优点）
Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．（电子书的缺点）
However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．（高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．（我的看法）．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，你校英语校刊正在举办"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，注意要适当拓展，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
（高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．
该句使用that引导同位语从句，作为view的内容；which引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．
so…that…如此以至于，句意为我的日程安排如此紧张以至于选择电子书节省很多时间．
高级词汇：advantage优点；compared with与…相比；take up占据；would rather宁愿．

解答 There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books． 
        Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．（高分句型一）Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．（电子书的优点）
       Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．（电子书的缺点）
       However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．（高分句型二）Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．（我的看法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．