Question

【题目】为了吸引更多的留学生到你校学习，校学生会决定拍摄一部反映学校生活的小电影，现在招募学生演员。请你以学生会的名义，根据以下提示撰写一个通知。

(1)此次活动的目的；

(2)演员需要具备的条件：沟通能力强，擅长英语……（可以适当发挥)；

(3)小电影的内容简介；

(4)最后报名期限：下周一前到学生会报名。

注意：

(1)词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

(3)通知格式己给出，不计入总词数。

NOTICE

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The Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】NOTICE

In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school, our Students’ Union has deeded to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school.

If you want to show your talent in this film, you need to have some related qualities. First of all, you need to have a good communicating ability so that you shall cooperate well with the whole team. Besides, you must be good at English, especially spoken English. What’s more, if you have ever participated in similar activities before, it will be an advantage.

The main contents of the film are about our campus life, such as having lessons in class, playing basketball in stadium, having lunch in the dining hall and so on. If you are interested in this activity, please sign on for it at the Students’ Union before next Monday. We are expecting your participation and contribution.

The Students’ Union

【解析】本文属于提纲类短文，同时也属于应用文中的通知。使用第一人称和一般现在时为主。要点：1. 拍摄一部反映学校生活的小电影的目的。2.演员需要具备的条件：沟通能力强，擅长英语……。3. 小电影的内容简介；4. 最后报名期限：下周一前到学生会报名。提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点。

范文亮点：本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，如First of all，Besides，What’s more；另外高级句式的使用也较多，如：In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school, our Students’ Union has deeded to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school.中的不定式作状语用法。If you want to show your talent in this film, you need to have some related qualities.中的if从句等。