Question

象山某高中举办了一次“看电影”的活动。其中，高三（1）班的李华同学对电影《Tiny Times》里的一句话：“We are still efforts in the depths of despair（绝望）, and this effort be little stars in universe（宇宙）”十分有感觉。请仔细体味这句话，并结合自己的具体事例，根据下列要求写一篇100—120词的读后感。

写作要求：1、针对摘录句来谈谈你的理解。

2、以李华的身份，简述自己的亲身经历。（要符合这句话的意思）

注意：文章开头已给出，不计入词数总数

Last week, our school held a movie activity. The movie ，named Tiny Times， made me impressed, especially a word in the movie let me unforgettable：“We are still efforts in the depths of despair, and this effort be little stars in universe.”

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

In my opinion, we should try our best to realize our goals even though there is little hope .The efforts seem to be the lights in the darkness, leading the way to hope and success.

    I used to be a shy girl in my primary school. I was weak in English at that time, especially for spoken English. So I was afraid to answer the teacher’s questions during English classes. After I entered my dream middle school, something changed. I started to read many interesting English stories and my English teacher was patient to help me a lot. I studied hard in class and practiced by watching English films and listening to English songs in my free time. Little by little, I found it more and more interesting to learn English. I could even talk with my classmates fluently in English and I was not shy any more. At last, I got high grades in English and I had confidence to do it better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料很简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。在写作之前学生必须考虑以下问题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是针对电影《Tiny Times》里的一句话谈谈自己的感受，所以要用一般现在时。要求针对这个话题写一件个人经历的事。因此本文必须用第一人称。还有一般过去时。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如In my opinion，used to，Little by little, at last ，还运用了复合句和it做宾语的用法等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：So he 句式的变化等等。

考点：提纲作文。