Question

【题目】假设你是李华，即将高中毕业，对大学专业选择比较困惑，请给曾经做过生涯规划师的前外教Mr.Joyce写封信，介绍你本人在学习、个性等方面的长处以及你的职业愿景，并请他为你在选择大学专业方面提出一些建议。

注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100左右(格式已给出，不计入总词数)。

Dear Mr. Joyce，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】DearMr. Joyce，

I am Li Hua, one of your former students. It will be only two months before we graduate from high school, yet I am quite confused about what I should choose to major in the university. Since you once worked as a career planner, I am writing to consult you, hoping to get some valuable advice with regard to major application.

I am good at mathematics and physics. Besides, my interest also goes to music, and I have been active in the school's orchestra. As for my job in the future, I want to be a scientist who will help make the world a better place. I am eagerly looking forward to your early reply!

Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你即将高中毕业，对大学专业选择比较困惑，请给曾经做过生涯规划师的前外教Mr.Joyce写封信，介绍你本人在学习、个性等方面的长处以及你的职业愿景，并请他为你在选择大学专业方面提出一些建议。人称使用第一人称，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：former（以前的），graduate from（从……毕业），confused（困惑的），major（主修），career planner（生涯规划师），consult（咨询），valuable（有价值的），be good at（擅长）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如同位语I am Li Hua, one of your former students.；时间状语从句It will be only two months before we graduate from high school；宾语从句yet I am quite confused about what I should choose to major in the university；原因状语从句Since you once worked as a career planner, I am writing to consult you；定语从句As for my job in the future, I want to be a scientist who will help make the world a better place.；非谓语动词的运用I am writing to consult you, hoping to get some valuable advice with regard to major application.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。