Question

【题目】如图所示，一群高中学生正在操场捡拾垃圾，旁边有部分学生在踢球玩耍，对捡垃圾者熟视无睹。请你根据对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。短文应包含以下内容：

1. 简要描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；

2. 目前校园内环保状况；

3. 你自己的感想和建议。

注意：

1. 可参照图片及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

As is vividly shown in the picture,

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly shown in the picture, some volunteers are bending down and picking up rubbish, with plastic bags in their hands and sweat on their foreheads. Nearby are some boys playing football, totally ignoring what other students are doing.

While focusing on their studies, some students do not pay enough attention to their behavior at school, and littering is the most common. That’s not appropriate behavior for us high school students. It not only dirties the environment, but also does great harm to the image of the school.

As a matter of fact, a clean environment can never be emphasized too much. It beautifies our school, making it a good place to study in. We should develop good habits of protecting the environment. Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin. Let’s keep in mind that a better environment means a better life.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息和图表说明来介绍具体情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照方位顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如倒装句和宾语从句穿插：Nearby are some boys playing football, totally ignoring what other students are doing；It beautifies our school, making it a good place to study in.非谓语动词作状语；还有让步状语从句：Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin。此外，文章还使用了大量短语bend down，pick up, focus on , pay attention to，do great harm to，develop good habits of，keep in mind等。插入语As a matter of fact，以及连词not…but… 的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。