Question

快餐现在在中国很流行，但快餐对人的身体却没什么好处。请根据以下要点以“Fast Food”为题写一篇短文，准备发表在一份生活杂志上。词数：150左右。

现状	快餐在中国非常流行，人们尤其是儿童和青少年喜欢吃快餐。
受欢迎的原因	方便，节约时间； 既可在快餐店里吃又可带回家吃； 店里环境干净、舒服； 服务周到，食品质量有保证。
存在的问题	从营养角度讲，快餐食品却不尽如人意。
建议	如时间来不及可考虑吃快餐，但以偶尔品尝为宜； …

Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.

Answer 1

There are several reasons for its popularity. First of all, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. You just go into a fast food restaurant, order your food, and your food is ready in no time. Secondly, you can either eat there or take it away.Thirdly, the environment of fast food restaurant is both clean and comfortable. Fourthly, it has excellent service, and the quality of food is guaranteed. However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value. Having too much fast food can have a bad effect on the health. Personally, fast food is only a good choice only when you are in a hurry and you should turn to it once in a while. It’s good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。