Question

9．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions．
简要描述图片内容，并就图片反映的现象，谈谈你的看法．
BLOG：博客
（注：文中不得出现真实的个人信息）

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于博客的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：一个父亲问女儿今天在学校过的如何，女儿说你可以在我的博客上看到．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为简要描述图片内容．第二部分为图片反映的现象．第三部分为作者的看法．
重点短语与句型：
 became a inseparable part of 成为不可分割的一部分
What's worse糟糕的是
wide the gap 扩大差距
communicate with 交流
高分句型一：From the picture，we can know that the internet has became a inseparable part of our life此句用了that引导宾语从句
高分句型二：It is right to worry about this此句it 作形式主语，真正主语是不定式．

解答 The Impact of the Internet Communction
In this picture，we can see a father asked his daughter about her school day and his daughter said to her dad that he could read the information on her blog．From the picture，we can know that the Internet has become a inseparable part of our life．（高分句型一）It has a wide impact acoss the world．However，some people are worried that the interpersonal communication will disapper because of the Internet．（描述图片内容）
It is right to worry about this．（高分句型二）Nowadays，we spend more and more time on the Internet．It lets us have less time to commucation with others．What's worse，it will widen the gap between people．Also，some people think they can solve problems and make faithful friends on Internet．（图片反映的现象）
In the way of my thinking，the Internet is just a tool for us．When a friend or family ask how you are going，you should communicate with him or her．It can make him or her more easy to understand your feeling and give you suggestions（作者的看法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．