Question

【题目】假定你是李华，最近学校电台打算新开播一个英语栏目，并就栏目的相关内容征集意见。请你给校电台写一封信，提出自己的建议，内容包括：

1. 期望播出的栏目内容及原因；

2. 提议栏目名称及播出时段；

3. 其他建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours.

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m very happy to hear that a new English programme will be broadcast by our school TV station. I am crazy about English, and I do hope to know more about English culture. Many students around me also have the same idea. So 1 think the programme can introduce culture of English speaking countries, such as the US, the UK, Australia or Canada.

I’d prefer it if the programme could be named as English around the world. What’s more, I think it can be broadcast from 5:30 to 6:00 p.m. every day, because most students are free during that time, when some students may play sports, and some may watch the programme.

Besides, it will be popular to play some English songs, which can help to develop students’ interests. I’m sure we will benefit a lot from the programme.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，就学校新开播的英语栏目，提出自己的建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 提出建议。

2. 具体内容：1）期望播出的栏目内容及原因；2）提议栏目名称及播出时段；3）其他建议。

第二步: 列提纲（重点词组）

be crazy about; such as; what’s more; develop students’ interests; benefit from

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m very happy to hear that a new English programme will be broadcast by our school TV station.

2. I am crazy about English, and I do hope to know more about English culture.

3. Many students around me also have the same idea.

4. I think the programme can introduce culture of English speaking countries, such as the US, the UK, Australia or Canada.

5. I’d prefer it if the programme could be named as English around the world.

6. I think it can be broadcast from 5:30 to 6:00 p.m. every day, because most students are free during that time, when some students may play sports, and some may watch the programme.

7. It will be popular to play some English songs, which can help to develop students’ interests.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改